It's war in my mind (preview)

soylent.green · Post by **soylent.green** » Sat Apr 02, 2005 7:25 am

This file has expired and is no longer available here. The owner of the topic can re-upload the file, or post a link to an off-site file. <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: Industrial <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Uses: JV1080 Pulsar FX Synth Mixer copyright 2005 soylent.green from planetz _____________________________________ Like previuos posts of mine this is a track in a preview state. No intro, no realy convincing end and the mix is somewhat unbalanced. 
But nevertheless I like this track and want to share it with you. Hope you like it too. Feel free to share you're opinion about possible improvements with me...

Cheers,
Peter

Nestor · Post by **Nestor** » Wed Apr 06, 2005 5:01 pm

Hi, I have not written music reviews here for ages… I have a lot of work to do.

Well, it is difficult to say “improve it” like this or like that, as it seems to be a very personal atmosphere you have created. I perhaps would like some pad sweeps here and there, from the middle and on.

Perhaps I could say that the structure is bit too repetitive to me, but that’s it.

Then there is the personal taste of each of us, and this is not always important, as the most important thing of them all is that YOU like it! The more you like it, the more I will find what you do interesting to listen at. When somebody does not like his own work, I am normally not interested in listening at it.

emzee · Post by **emzee** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 11:42 pm

I hear potential for a great track. I'd like you to map out a structure and come up with a few contrasting themes.

I'd like to hear some acoustic celtic theme and sounds in an intro and bridge, but that's what comes to my mind. A few varied themes, build in some highs and lows. It'll be great.

Liquid EDGE · Post by **Liquid EDGE** » Sun Apr 10, 2005 12:48 pm

i like it .. got a good feel to it.

nice and loud as well. but lacks that sheen.maybe it's becuase there is to much overall distortion??. but as you said you havn't finished the mix yet.

otherwise very nice

cheers

Post by **hubird** » Sun Apr 10, 2005 5:36 pm

with this track, you could try to put it through a vintage warmer like the one by PSP.
Preset 'Finalize1' would do the job fine