Lilies

ervilha · Post by **ervilha** » Mon Feb 02, 2004 8:56 am

This file has expired and is no longer available here. The owner of the topic can re-upload the file, or post a link to an off-site file. <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: Trip Rock? <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Uses: Pulsar Effects,Pulsar Mixers,Pulsar Synths copyright © 2004 Ervilha _____________________________________ Here's our very first attempt at a track. We value any constructive comments, about the song, the sound, the mix, anything!

Nestor · Post by **Nestor** » Tue Feb 03, 2004 9:09 pm

I like the sad atmosphere at the beginning. The voice is nice, but sometimes goes too out of tune. It is difficult to give advices about how to sing, or tell anything respect to the voices because it is always something too personal. But well, I think voices here are kind of scared to sing… even if you have to mistake… don’t worry and just SING what you feel.

There is a loud voice suddenly, I understand the effect, but it didn’t work. I would like for it to be replaced by a echo, or perhaps an effect, but this sudden loud voice end does not make sense to me.

By the end, (and this is a matter of personal taste) I would like the song to build up a little more, cos the atmosphere gives much more, and then using big heavy drums. Hope it did help with some ideas…

ervilha · Post by **ervilha** » Sat Feb 07, 2004 1:54 pm

Thanks for listening and for taking the time to share your thoughts! We very much appreciate it.

Not sure what you mean with 'the atmosphere gives much more'. Could you please explain?

Nestor · Post by **Nestor** » Sat Feb 07, 2004 3:08 pm

Sorry, sometimes I am not clear with my words...

What I mean is that by the end, the song could build into a more intense atmosphere, this is what I would like anyway, that is why I said, it is a matter of personal taste. For instance, at 03:05, it would be nice if the voice were to go up an octave with the main melody, the drum would not stop till the end. The song would start a building on a “non stop” way, this goes up and up all the time, adding a couple of voices in choir, then the drum sounds or samples could be stronger, more upfront and some guitar distortion would be cool as well.

This is perhaps not at all what you want to do, but well… this is my perception of the song. I would like a hard end for it, the atmosphere asks me personally, to build into a much bigger end. Cheers.