my new song, rate it and help me!

[the19thbear]

here is one of my songs, made in cubase sx, mixed in xtc mode. with scope 4,5 (luna card) with 8in/out box.
tell me what you think, and tell me how i can do better, and give me record deal;)

thanks, i would appreciate some feedback!

[garyb]

pretty cool.

i thought that the vocal was a little hot at first and a couple of times the compressor was working just a little hard, bit that's nit-picking.

[hubird]

cool, and well done. I like structured and finished stuff.
it's a product
don't like guitars, text, voices in general, but that's another story

[Lima]

I like it, very nice work!

[AudioIrony]

Good job . . .

The train sample was a cool idea