Say yeah or no ....... Breakbeat??

Liquid EDGE · Post by **Liquid EDGE** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 4:45 am

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wot is it?
who am i? where am i? why are we here?

(not mastered)

Moskeeto · Post by **Moskeeto** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 6:28 am

Breakbeat is good, but feel that both the beat and bass lack a little punch and energy, some more fills (to make them more interresting)and beefing up the drums (they sound a little thin all over)wouldn't hurt either. And it doesn't feel like the tune evolves much either, but with a little more work, it could be a nice little tune.
Only my oppinion tho (and I'm far from an expert):)

Skeet

Counterparts · Post by **Counterparts** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 8:56 am

Liquid EDGE wrote:
wot do peeps think of this ?
wot is it?

Quite different from your other stuff! The lyrics made me laugh, I must admit

Not sure if I'd call it breakbeat...I thought that it was quite pop. I didn't get on too well with the bass sound...it felt a little high pitched/light in the mix, and it's pretty up-front too. Maybe drop it by an octave?

Or beef-up the bass in some other way perhaps.

who am i? where am i? why are we here?

In order:

1. A reflection of yourself

2. Directly above the centre of the Earth

3. To enhance awareness

Keep them choons coming!

Royston

Spirit · Post by **Spirit** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 9:36 am

The four note progression is far too obvious. Makes me want to rush the song along to see if anything else is going to happen melody-wise -- but it doesn't. The drums also sound like a loop off some CD - also too usual. Not in my top 10 of your material.

But then maybe "usual" here actually translates to "commercial" ?

I like the sounds though, especially the swirling pan thingummy.

Liquid EDGE · Post by **Liquid EDGE** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 6:49 pm

Cheers for the comments, will look into making it a bit more varied, chunky and such.

it's good to get others opinions for a different view on improving a track.

spirit, spose it is sort of generic. when i did the track it was more of a "only thinking of production" basicaly having each sound clear and unaltered by other sounds if you know wot i mean..

In order:

1. A reflection of yourself

2. Directly above the centre of the Earth

3. To enhance awareness

Keep them choons coming!

Royston

lol. to right..and thanks