Mmmmh, I'm not a fan of the genre, but there's something strage in this track, in my opinion.
Probably the synth you used rising above the drums and the other rithmical parts, making in that way a lot of confusion.
Try to make the drums a bit more important.
The change of the key is nice, but I think it's unexpected. Why not do something in the arrangement to prepare the listened?
In the complex the track sounds nasty and dark, so the name matching well my first impression.
