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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 4:45 am
by Liquid EDGE
This file has expired and is no longer available here. The owner of the topic can re-upload the file, or post a link to an off-site file. <BR><BR><a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: Electronic<BR> <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Uses: Pulsar Mixers<BR> copyright © mutationrecords<BR> _____________________________________<BR><BR> wot do peeps think of this ?
wot is it?
who am i? where am i? why are we here?
(not mastered)
Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 6:28 am
by Moskeeto
Breakbeat is good, but feel that both the beat and bass lack a little punch and energy, some more fills (to make them more interresting)and beefing up the drums (they sound a little thin all over)wouldn't hurt either. And it doesn't feel like the tune evolves much either, but with a little more work, it could be a nice little tune.
Only my oppinion tho (and I'm far from an expert):)
Skeet
Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 8:56 am
by Counterparts
Liquid EDGE wrote:
wot do peeps think of this ?
wot is it?
Quite different from your other stuff! The lyrics made me laugh, I must admit
Not sure if I'd call it breakbeat...I thought that it was quite pop. I didn't get on too well with the bass sound...it felt a little high pitched/light in the mix, and it's pretty up-front too. Maybe drop it by an octave?
Or beef-up the bass in some other way perhaps.
who am i? where am i? why are we here?
In order:
1. A reflection of yourself
2. Directly above the centre of the Earth
3. To enhance awareness
Keep them choons coming!
Royston
Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 9:36 am
by Spirit
The four note progression is far too obvious. Makes me want to rush the song along to see if anything else is going to happen melody-wise -- but it doesn't. The drums also sound like a loop off some CD - also too usual. Not in my top 10 of your material.
But then maybe "usual" here actually translates to "commercial" ?
I like the sounds though, especially the swirling pan thingummy.
Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 6:49 pm
by Liquid EDGE
Cheers for the comments, will look into making it a bit more varied, chunky and such.
it's good to get others opinions for a different view on improving a track.
spirit, spose it is sort of generic. when i did the track it was more of a "only thinking of production" basicaly having each sound clear and unaltered by other sounds if you know wot i mean..
In order:
1. A reflection of yourself
2. Directly above the centre of the Earth
3. To enhance awareness
Keep them choons coming!
Royston
lol. to right..and thanks